[pooma-dev] [RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes

[Jeffrey Oldham]

	Thanks for the comments.

On Mon, Mar 26, 2001 at 02:44:28PM -0800, Allan Stokes wrote:
> 
> Review of Jeffrey's patch.  Everything seems fine.  Didn't understand
> implication of s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g so this is not confirmed.  Two
> small suggestions (one on EngineTag, one about "Pooma code").

I backed out the s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g and will await someone
else's comments.

> > 	* tut-04.html: Move sentence regarding component forwarding from
> > 	next paragraph to preceding paragraph concerning component
> > 	forwarding.
> 
> 404,411 all I see here is the lexemes "<a" moved to the end of the previous
> line.
> Assuming this is spurious.

Yes, just overzealous Emacs's paragraph refilling.

> OK on 413,430
> 
> > 	Remove an extra space and an extraneous comma.  Add a missing
> > 	parenthesis.  Fix array's name to match the other text.
> 
> <tt>EngineTag</tt> is still mentioned in the descriptive text.  Maybe better
> to remove <tt> emphasis and just say "input EngineTag" meaning <tt>E</tt>

I am not sure how to word this.

Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
oldham at codesourcery.com